Today at Fraser Heights Secondary we had Zack Jackson, a slam poet come in and present some of his poetry to us. His poems are very interesting and they all seemed to connect to his life. His poems were inspiring and I think that many kids interested in writing would become motivated and inspired by his poems as well as his stories. He showed that ideas for poems can come from anywhere, from a jail cell to a bus stop. I think he executed his poems really well, not only by talking in a loud and clear voice but also by using hand gestures. I would love to hear some of his poetry again next year.
Glad you enjoyed his Zaccheus' performance - do you think you could write and perform something similar? Poetry is coming up soon!
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you summarized the entire performance in a few lines, so your point and opinion stand out more. Try to avoid using the "I thinks" though. Overall, this is a nice paragraph.