Friday, 14 March 2014

Do Schools Kill Creativity

Schools are the start of, Creativity fading, Thus should change for good. School district is now, Changing for better future, Students of all schools. Being commanded, Restricting children's future, Society's fall. Innovate and start, Ahead to the new future Will be this world's hope.
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  1. jessie.c14 March 2014 at 10:27

    It became one big paragraph again..........
    (~_~;)

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    1. Ms Lees14 April 2014 at 22:20

      Did you try writing in word and uploading to google docs to link your poem? I think we talked about this? Didn't we? Try that.

      Interesting choice of words in places - "Being commanded" and Restricting Children's Future, Society's fall" are very powerful.
      You might be able to enhance the poem further with images or links to your posts. See me for ideas if you would like. Maybe we can share this out to some of my colleagues on twitter and try to get some responses for you. What do you think?

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  2. Unknown25 March 2014 at 13:47

    Hi Jessie,
    I think that making a poem about this topic is a very creative idea! The only thing that could make this poem even better would be if you added a bit more detail about the issue, such as how students are being commanded. Other than that you have done a great job putting the message out about this topic.

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  3. Leah R6 April 2014 at 11:28

    Jessie,

    Good job on coming up with a poem, sometimes they can be very challenging. Try to make sure you add words like a where they would fit. For example changing for better future to changing for a better future. I agree with Manreet that you could try to add more detail about how schools affect students creativity. Overall you did really well, keep up the good work!

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  4. Ms Lees14 April 2014 at 22:21

    Forgot to mention - I am pleased you took the creative choice. Not many do. Everyone is a little afraid of sharing their creativity in public for fear of criticism. I am so glad you did. :)

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